Pro Ski Machine

Pro Ski Machine

someone can check my thesis? to rewrite a sentence in the thesis statement?

Sentences 1 Application for work can be a negative experience. 2. Skiing is more fun, but can be expensive and very dangerous. 3. There are many advantages and disadvantages in new cars voting district. 4. The liberalization of the telephone system has been a major problem. 5 In this letter I will debate the pros and cons of controversial motorcycle helmet law. My answer 1. Your view when applying for a job can affect weather get to work. 2.The price of equipment and the risk of being injuried puts a damper on skiing. 3. In Arizona new voting machines led to short lines, despite the new law for identification. 4. Liberalization telephone system has resulted in an increase in customers see in annoying Telemarketing calls. 5. The purpose of motorcycle helmet law are to protect the rider, however, some riders do not care for interference law. sentences should be rewritten in a thesis statement

Sorry, I do not understand at all what you want control? If you explain further I will try to give my answer ... They look pretty good to me so I have changed only spelling and wording ... 1. Your view when applying for a job can have an impact on you at work or not. 2.The price of equipment and risk of injury put a dampener on the prospects of skiing. 3. In Arizona new voting machines to carry on despite short lines of a new law for identification. 4. Liberalization telephone system has resulted in an increase in customers see annoying Telemarketing calls. 5. The purpose of motorcycle helmet laws are to protect the rider, however, some riders see the law as a concern Sorry if that is completely useless and not what you wanted! Good luck wit it!